Open Poetry #39 |
I sing |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Birds sing and I believe it’s true; there’s a song in everyone and a vibrancy of movement to enliven the enslaved. I sing sometimes a lullaby these days more than before to stop me walking out the door weighted with a dream ~ but I want to rock and roll the times and be cool, be cool, be cool, with my reality. And I hear the moody blues behind the eyelids droning on in vain seeking acclaim from the “who I am”. Rap, rap, rap, and something’s gone from harmonic soul refrains that in the aftermath want to drift lazily on a love song. Happy songs – clap, clap, clap, and tomorrow brings the classics done before by everyone and not uniquely mine like the silent soulful song I sing reverently for you ~ and I wonder if you hear it amongst the alternatives. Helen / 16 September 2006 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very deep and wonderful song you sing, dear Helen! Even thoughts are energy, imagine songs ... wherever the listener stays he hears, that is if he truly listens. We still have to learn to listen better to all the tunes of life. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I hear your song, and it is sad and happy......and beautiful. .....jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I love your song Helen you always leave something for me to hold on to... " I sing sometimes a lullaby these days more than before to stop me walking out the door weighted with a dream ~" |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is so beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen, I hear you singing .... lovely RDB |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful! And as tuneless as I am without a radio or something (even that doesn't always come out right)this is particularly nice to hear/read.... jwesley |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The songs inside are the melodies of dreams. Awesome write Helen. TD Happy Holidays |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your comments. May the festive season herald in a new year of all good things for everyone. Best wishes Helen [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (12-20-2006 11:01 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your soulful song was sung so sweetly. Your voice ~ and pen ~ sang to my soul. Love & Christmas Light, Linda |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it Yes, there is always a song in my heart! Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yes. I can hear the song, especially the happy one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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