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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2007-01-06 12:28 PM


I found Death sitting at a corner table
His chair tilted precariously against the wall

He appeared to be in his cups
Yet, trying to be as discreet as its possible
For such a skeletal figure to be

And a bit dated

Wayfarers hiding the dark voids in his face
Where one would expect to find eyes

A faded Hawaiian shirt
Covered the pale translucence
That serves for his skin

Improbably thin fingers
Pushed a drink in my direction
Bidding me to join him
"
In greeting, Ol’ Scratch said

"You see me as bones
And smelling of Putrecene
Because you think it"

And when I sat

"My cloak contains both
Everything and nothing
I am what you will"

Then, much later

"As for the matter
Of near-death experience
All, have one daily"

I could see how the evening was to be

"I am no killer
Nor am I bringer of life
I sow not, nor reap"

Long stretches of thoughtful silence

"What you call your soul
Does not belong to the flesh
The flesh borrows it"

Broken, only, by cold iterations

"Though, I have no sway
All of Mans’ philosophies
Need to address me"

And hot swallows of whiskey

"Even as the grains
Fall finally through the glass
The sand yet remains"

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with you
1 posted 2007-01-06 01:11 AM


mister...this is awesome...
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2 posted 2007-01-06 01:16 AM


I'd reply, but I have this odd scratchy sand-like feeling in my throat...



Know that I miss you.

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3 posted 2007-01-06 01:18 AM


Hey i liked the poem nice job
Sunshine
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4 posted 2007-01-06 07:36 AM



Welcome home...




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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2007-01-06 08:24 AM


wranx
We are in a serious turn today. Welcome back

icebox
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in the shadows
6 posted 2007-01-06 09:07 AM




"What you call your soul
Does not belong to the flesh
The flesh borrows it"

so true...so true.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2007-01-06 09:12 AM



Welcome Home Poet.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2007-01-06 09:41 AM


Great to read you again.

believe in what your heart feels...

Huan Yi
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Waukegan
9 posted 2007-01-06 04:32 PM


wranx,


So you’ve decided on your own mythology;
whatever gets you through . . .


John

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10 posted 2009-02-25 02:12 AM


you still there?
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