Open Poetry #39 |
Beautiful Love - Perfection |
Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
Perfection A smile that in seconds brings down anyone's guard In a deck of fifty two you're that one queen of hearts Your tender touch cures soul’s once left permanently scarred Each kiss a bulls eye, on target like a game of darts Hair spun of the finest cotton coated with pure gold Your words are my sandy beaches on a sunny day A comforting smile that leaves anyone consoled Every movement synchronized like ballet dance per se My queen still containing pure innocence; untainted Your body language is a love language once extinct Artistic love has every wall of my heart painted Flawless destiny, God had preordained our souls linked You gave me that second breath of life that I needed Taught me the spectrum of love right from its origin You restore amazement in my world once bleeded I was an angel with clipped wings but now soar~again Leaves change during autumn flowers blossom during spring Summers live in our hearts, winters are white and pure Time slows, you become all the seasons ever changing Never have I doubted, that our love wouldn't endure Oceans can separate, but what we built is lasting I built a bridge that is weatherproof straight to you heart Odds say we're through, but our colors are contrasting This book is at its end, but its series at its start |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Leaves change during autumn flowers blossom during spring Summers live in our hearts, winters are white and pure Time slows, you become all the seasons ever changing Never have I doubted, that our love wouldn't endure" This stood out for me the most...a very lovely poem |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent rhyming! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"A smile that in seconds brings down anyone's guard In a deck of fifty two you're that one queen of hearts" excellent Paul |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
very nicely penned Paul Be well RDB |
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