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0 posted 2007-01-05 03:11 PM



Perfection

A smile that in seconds brings down anyone's guard  
In a deck of fifty two you're that one queen of hearts
Your tender touch cures soul’s once left permanently scarred
Each kiss a bulls eye, on target like a game of darts

Hair spun of the finest cotton coated with pure gold
Your words are my sandy beaches on a sunny day
A comforting smile that leaves anyone consoled
Every movement synchronized like ballet dance per se

My queen still containing pure innocence; untainted
Your body language is a love language once extinct
Artistic love has every wall of my heart painted
Flawless destiny, God had preordained our souls linked

You gave me that second breath of life that I needed
Taught me the spectrum of love right from its origin
You restore amazement in my world once bleeded
I was an angel with clipped wings but now soar~again

Leaves change during autumn flowers blossom during spring
Summers live in our hearts, winters are white and pure
Time slows, you become all the seasons ever changing
Never have I doubted, that our love wouldn't endure

Oceans can separate, but what we built is lasting
I built a bridge that is weatherproof straight to you heart
Odds say we're through, but our colors are contrasting
This book is at its end, but its series at its start

© Copyright 2007 Paul - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-01-05 03:30 PM


"Leaves change during autumn flowers blossom during spring
Summers live in our hearts, winters are white and pure
Time slows, you become all the seasons ever changing
Never have I doubted, that our love wouldn't endure"


This stood out for me the most...a very lovely poem

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2 posted 2007-01-05 04:44 PM


excellent rhyming!
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3 posted 2007-01-05 09:22 PM




"A smile that in seconds brings down anyone's guard  
In a deck of fifty two you're that one queen of hearts"

excellent Paul

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4 posted 2007-01-06 12:07 PM


very nicely penned Paul

Be well
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