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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"If" If I held you in my arms, enclosed in warm embrace, would you give your loving charms so freely and with grace? If I kissed your supple lips, and pressed your soul to mine, would your mind reel from the sips of fine full bodied wine? If I dared then to inhale, and stole your breath away, would you cling to me so frail, and promise you would stay? If I whispered your sweet name, and sent it on the wind, would your heart melt from the flame, and passion once again? again... and again... and again . |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully romantic  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
" If I whispered your sweet name, and sent it on the wind, would your heart melt from the flame, and passion once again? again... and again... and again" ....yes.  Now while the leaves still dance on the wind While the moon and the clouds come spinning Will you whisper my name again? Again...and again...and again. . In the midst of winter, |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful and romantic , I hope their answer is yes !!!! Hope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
That's a YES! Very romantic write. TD |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love your structure. Excellent feel, and great ending. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Nicely done..Have already read a lot of your older archives and enjoy reading your new posts. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
If I dared then to inhale, and stole your breath away, would you cling to me so frail, and promise you would stay? ~AHO~ MoonShadow how sweetly warm,softly loving,and deeply giving are your words! Sigi my friend for sharing!
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
I'm melting! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You dang near make it impossible to say otherwise. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
“and again... and again” oh yes MoonShadow romantically speaking you rock! |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
loved this, especially the last 2 stanzas the last line really is a good ending line.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, yes, yes, pick me! LOL Happy New Year RDB |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Thank you dear poets for your encouragement. Your joyous response glows in a reflection that transcends and warms my soul. Nancy,Hope,TD, Sunshine, Lady, RDB.... you said the magic word. Now cross the line to my side. Janette... so wonderful to see you read me. I have missed you, your work and your marvelous reactions. It is a pleasure to 'melt' you, Milady. |
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