Open Poetry #39 |
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With Age |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Child! At less Than half my age, Something you will never be. You should know That words not said at night Will present no better in daylight. Where age is no guarantee Of wisdom, Albeit I would use it As a poor excuse To put an old head On young shoulders. In so doing I try To provide a lesson, To be taken Use it, lose it Or place it In some distant place For future reference. The choice is yours, You are the one That will have to live with it Not I. For I will not Hold it against you. But know that in gain Of personal freedom There is also pain. Irrespective of which You will also know That your Fathers door Will always remain open to you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...comes wisdom hopefully, but life has a way of interfering with that and you have to do the best you can and be there for others... nicely written M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...touching write |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Children test a parents patience but never their love. Thanks for reading. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I can understand this write but at the end of the day the only words that have to be said are "your Fathers door Will always remain open to you." Oh, and an "I love you" tagged on at the end perhaps an essential that most of us forget. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Frank... wonderful inspiring words you write! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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