Open Poetry #39 |
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60 seconds (edit) |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981![]() |
60 seconds left in time, to throw the stones away, watch them sink, or watch them float There is no time to pray 50 seconds left in time, It's spreading like a fire first comes fear then comes denial But hatred shall not tire. 40 seconds left in time, where did we go wrong? cry in fear or trace the lines- I'll stand here and be strong 30 seconds left in time, Nothing won is free, We feel the heat, We pay the price What they call ‘victory’ 20 seconds left in time, what isn't ours to take- hugs and kisses, guns and bombs The wonders that we make Just ten more seconds left in time Prepare for aftershock- close the windows, close the doors No time to watch the clock Our time is up- what have we done? we're gone in 5, 4, 3, 2- ------------------------------- And old one, eh? Like, REALLY old. well, from someone as not old as me anyway u_u I remembered people rambling about how good it was, and was like "I'm totaly going to hate this when I reread it," but on second glance, it only needed a few edits. I hope you enjoy it |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I did and good to see you coming in through the window, rustling the shades..... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() good to see you peeking in nice eyeshot, Liz |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good one! Thanks for sharing. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Alright, so I was walking through memory lane today (my old posts) and my goodness, guess what I found. About a thousand incredibly sweet comments from you. Therefore, I'm bumping this one up to the top, (which is incredibly wonderful by the way), and stopping by to tell you how wonderful you are, and what a wonderful writer you are. Hope you still remember me. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad this got found ![]() |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I like this alot...I will definitely look up more, Take Care... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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