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the day you came my way
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the day you came my way |
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yvetters_24 Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 52california |
i remember that day you came my way i was in so much pain thinking i had nothing to gain but you stopped me dead in my tracks showed me the light told me never give up the fight you told me i ment so much more to you then i ever knew as your words went through my head tears fled at the time i wasnt sure why i was crying i just knew i was making a mistake becasue it was my life i was trying to take now i know why those tears streamed down my face you showed me what i wanted to see how quickly my life can be taken away from me as i sat there and cryed knowing how i could have just died you spoke to me you told me things werent ment to turn out that way you showed me i have so much more to give you gave me a reason to live a reason to continue my fight so now im setting out to prove you right to live to my fullest and shine my light |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"to live to my fullest and shine my light" Excellent write. Love the last line. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
you showed me i have so much more to give Siyo young sister,it is when one learns to give,one learns in truth to live! Well done!
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good for you...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderful words here... shows how courageous you are in spirit and in life..well done RDB |
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