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Picture Her, All in Dark
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Picture Her, All in Dark |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Picture Her, All In Dark In layers of deep quiet peel away the veils of time as one would strip an old painting gasping for air for she is in need of oxygen for her pores to breathe beneath the black of soot and time lay virgin skin, waiting, beckoning, responding with blushed pulse for the right touch. Too hard, and the veil will crumble, steeped in age, weary to time and sterility of absence, she moans; too soft, and the veil will mold beneath fingertips, perhaps, yours, if they do not move in quick yet graceful succession… Touch and bring forth like a well-witcher’s wand the liquid of tone, spring color to cheek light air with hope, spiral spine to leap and she will… Your will becomes her. And Mona leases her smile. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Your sunshine lights a world of its own.  |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
and bring forth like a well-witcher’s wand the liquid of tone, spring color to cheek light air with hope, spiral spine to leap and she will… Your will becomes her. And Mona leases her smile. OH,MY! Nvdaegehi Utsisdayugisgv you give new meaning to why is it the Mona Lisa smile,the secret of waiting held within for only the perfect touch of the perfect love! Sigi!
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...You step inside and see the soul within the art...lovely!  |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
A beautiful depiction of the painting... lovely. late |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*smiling* |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie is right, you know! Lovely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh, Kari, this was absolutely beautiful Touch and bring forth like a well-witcher’s wand the liquid of tone, spring color to cheek light air with hope, spiral spine to leap amazing pen you own missy |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Nicely described-nicely done. You made me feel for the painting. And then I wondered if you meant me to extend the metaphor to people who have been put away, like those in the nursing home that I see when we visit. A little care, a little help, and they can shine too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Touch and bring forth like a well-witcher’s wand the liquid of tone, spring color to cheek light air with hope, spiral spine to leap and she will… Your will becomes her. And Mona leases her smile." WOW!! Your writing has taken on more depth recently. This is wonderful writing m'friend! In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I agree fully with my sister. Beautiful Karilea! hugs,Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I bequeath my smile to you  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I'll tell you what Karilea... you have been taking my breath away a lot lately just did it again! |
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