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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2007-01-03 01:50 PM

When you cannot find the stars
they rest in your eyes,
awaiting my gaze,
to be released
when we unleash
each other's passion;
which energy
lights the heavens.

Inspired by: /pip/Forum96/HTML/003327.html

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (01-03-2007 03:53 PM).]

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2007-01-03 03:03 PM

Yes, the energy of passion does wonders. Enjoyed!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2007-01-03 03:29 PM

Amazing! How do you pack so much potency into so few words?

a good commitee can decimate communication.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2007-01-03 04:34 PM

"When you cannot find the stars
they rest in your eyes,
awaiting my gaze,
to be released"

SO romantic!!

beautifully done

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

4 posted 2007-01-03 04:47 PM

which energy
lights the heavens.

Sigi Interloper these are exciting lessons am I learning,you say so very well the words many are seeking!

granny!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2007-01-03 04:50 PM

Oh my....huge sigh!!

Love this!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2007-01-03 05:37 PM

Supernova work, 'loper

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2007-01-03 06:05 PM

Very nice...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2007-01-03 06:50 PM

It wouldn't surprise me
to see Passion light the halls...

Well done!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2007-01-03 07:23 PM

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2007-01-03 09:28 PM

Awesome!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

11 posted 2007-01-03 10:23 PM

Interloper!
it's so...
awesome and romantic!

so that's where the stars go

sigh...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2007-01-04 07:35 AM

wow...I'm in awe

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2007-01-04 08:49 AM

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