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Sweet Water (short) |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Sweet Water" A gentle rain, a drop of dew, the sweat that's born of fear; The pride of these, Sweet Water, is a gentle woman's tear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely!  In the midst of winter, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice  M |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, how lovely ! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
elegant and so womanly...enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Thank you Dixie, Nancy, M and Interloper. Thanks for the Hug, Chris... I need all I can get. Lee J..... "Womanly"???? hmmmm as in ______? I am glad you enjoyed it, Milady. MoonShadow |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lovely. An hourglass painted with delicate mist. Enjoyed this very much. TD |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
MoonShadow you do use the most tender words gentle sigh... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no, what I meant is, and I should have explained but the poem blew me away and quit lost for words.... that a woman's emotions are so aptly understood by a man...sorry for the misunderstanding.... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Short but most decidedly sweet! To understand a woman's tears is to be gifted with wisdom! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
LeeJ... Ahhh Thank you, Milady. I was not offended by the term "Womanly" by the way. Albiet that I am very much... truly... all "male" (with everything in tact and functional)(blush, sorry to be graphic)... I have proudly enjoyed those who recognize that I do have an empathetic softer side that I willingly share. It is truely through those times that the soul is warmed to ecstacy and fulfillment. Hmmmm I hope that I have not revealed more than is called for here... forgive me if I have, dear Lady. MoonShadow |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Diamond, Lady, Honey... thank you for your kind response and I am honored that my humble work touched you warmly. MoonShadow |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
short yes, but wonderful as well. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi MoonShadow very soft knowing words of wisdom,there is great value in the womans tears.The man that understands these things,is the one who shows respect and honor all through his life,for all life! blessings
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My first vision of this was a long, dry desert. Wonderful answer to drought! |
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Tom Zart Senior Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 682 |
Wonderful, Wonderful, Wonderful |
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