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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2007-01-03 03:46 AM


Sweet
oh sweetness--
I love this~
percussion in an instrument
pounded by the strings I dream
as I were humanity
trying to capture flutterings
of an infant angel wings
learning how to fly
and dream

never to forget

the christening
of The Beguine

pearls

across the sky
and these
stars are cherished
memory

fluid, without knots.


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2007-01-03 06:49 AM


fluid without knots

to see as through a child's eyes...and lady, you've still got that ability...a gift far exceeding any material thing.  Thank you for sharing

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2007-01-03 08:50 AM


serenity,
I would play ring around the rosie with you.

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3 posted 2007-01-03 08:55 PM


Well heck all I could get my brain wrapped around was "String Of Pearls" and even if I am in the wrong space, it is a wonderful space to be as they sure don't make music like that anymore.  (And NO, I am not THAT old!)  
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4 posted 2007-01-03 09:10 PM



And let the pearls scatter...

that's why we see stars in the sky;
pearl's reflection.




Enchantress
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5 posted 2007-01-03 09:21 PM


Exactly waht Karilea said!  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2007-01-04 09:32 AM


Not to coin a phrase...
"Begin The Beguine"
I love it!
Write on!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2007-01-04 10:38 AM


~ my kind of music...my kind of words...oh Karen, my Karen ~
luv ya !!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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8 posted 2007-01-04 11:13 AM


nice read
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