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Peripherals |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Peripherals They stand like ghosts within a bog Like misty forms within a fog But not to light or fill a gleam Peripherals are like a dream Somehow they hide their dull aware Sometimes they slide beneath your stare But they are there to fill the when Just go back and look again They’re trifles of a slice of thin They only fill the back ground in But they are there in fact and stare And act upon the whole in bare So try to mind peripherals They’ll clear the picture fill the frills And you will see a cleaner mean In all in fact a sweater scene For things exposed a brighter light Will soften fancies of your night |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sy...I had a peripheral vision test a short time ago....I was afraid my right eye failed..those blinking lights were wild..but I passed!! It looks like you did too.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie LOL I can't see you missing a peripheral. You see things without glasses that I need glasses for.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I thought you were taling about printers and such like  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully written....very much enjoyed this Sy....  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, LOL That's one of them. LeeJ Thank you and the top of the morn to you.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Another wonderful write from you Sy! Much enjoyed the read. & , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Glad you enjoyed and hope you had a good New Year. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy you don't miss a thing peripheral or straight ahead I really love this poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady I am so glad you are my friend.  |
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