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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2007-01-01 12:31 PM

Diaphanous In Essence

In winter, on the high heels of spring
Breath after breath, rhythmic excitant
Dew clings on frosted smoke rings
Yearning morn’s meandering syllables

See through veils of fairy tales
It rains, taunting snow or peace
The quiet light of sheer release
Ardors sunrise, auburn rays aglow

Chiffon, the wind speaks magic
A touch that soothes of sorrow tragic
Might there be visible condolences demise
Though just a blink ago, the snow before my eyes

And now, we seem to hold each other’s hearts somehow
Or hibernate through winter flutters, trace of lips upon my brow

Copyright Kkh 12/31/06

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2007-01-01 11:55 AM

Hey Diamond this is a beeeauutiffuulll poem. Thank You for the delightful read ~Bill

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2007-01-01 12:47 PM

Very beautiful Kathleen!
Happy New Year to you and yours!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2007-01-01 12:57 PM

A See-Through Heart.
Maybe you have made history here with these words. Your poetry is with depth and clarity and pure and like that chiffon wind soothing upon your thoughts, or as a trace of lips upon your brow. Very compelling read. Is there more to the story? Beautiful thoughts penned in this write.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2007-01-01 01:03 PM

quote:
And now, we seem to hold each other’s hearts somehow
Or hibernate through winter flutters, trace of lips upon my brow

Fantastic write, dear TD, and the above lines just hit me powerfully with their intensity!

Happy New Year!
Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-01-01 03:01 PM

Grand-lovely imagery here (even in the Title!).....as per usual from
this fine poet of the morning star (Aurora’s sunrise)..... such as:

Breath after breath, rhythmic excitant

Dew clings on frosted smoke rings

It rains, taunting snow or peace

Serious applause!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2007-01-01 06:35 PM

Nicely done Ms. Queen of the Northern Lights
and Snow Flakes... This is your time of
year, isn't it?

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

7 posted 2007-01-01 06:53 PM

Sigi ThisDiamond what a wonderful way to see the world,through the words of your "eyes" one can feel the frosty nip,the excitement,and the glory of the dream!
blessings

granny!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2007-01-02 12:14 PM

"In winter, on the high heels of spring"

magic, what you do with words TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2007-01-02 12:28 PM

yes, very beautifully written

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2007-01-02 01:10 PM

write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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