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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-01-01 05:04 PM

It's dark as I sit here
by only the light of your words..
Needing that special touch
that is powered only by your hands.

There is an ache, then a blush
remembering the last time.

It was that first kiss
that held me to you, a timeless feel
creating a poetry of its own,
a moment's infinity.

The ache returns every now and then
with it sweet memories
to warm the dark of...
a cold Wynter's night.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-01-2007 11:32 PM).]

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2007-01-01 05:11 PM

AWE! that was so freakin sweet..Loved it!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2007-01-01 05:18 PM

“It was that first kiss
that held me to you, a timeless feel
creating a poetry of its own,
a moment's infinity.”

Wow…
A spark to igniting a flame,
and a nice moment of perpetuity.
Very nice write!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2007-01-01 05:19 PM

guess it was meant to be ~~laughing~~ at trutodaraiders

You snuck in there, JL..thank you

M

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

4 posted 2007-01-01 09:02 PM

That ache!
The price of such infinity.

Wishing you a comfortable New Year, M.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2007-01-02 12:30 PM

outstanding
love the play on Wynter...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2007-01-02 01:02 PM

AWESOME!
I love this!
Write on!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2007-01-02 04:16 PM

thank you all...guess I am beginning to feel a bit better even though the coughing will be my company for another week or two, I have been told

M

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