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My try for Balladeer. :coping
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My try for Balladeer. :coping |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Coping My passing has too many divisions for my minds coping And in the very grappling the teeter board starts its whacking The lifting of the high and low passes season’s sun and snow I often finds the sifting a problem with its unknown flow The winding and the coursing often leave an awful bruising And in the process holding on this battle I am loosing The mystery of the futures bring echoes of insanity When looking back at history mystery is fantasy It’s willing that I thrive on seems and dreams that settle my mind They are my ego smiling the making of a pleasures find Its subtle findings non exist, subtle findings in shuttle Sink those ships down in scuttle letting my mind a rebuttal The mutate is a magic ride someplace for my heart to hide A rebate for my mandate pride all in dreams of nights abide A muffling of reality, played on be or not to be A pantomime in shuffling, made of a bree from out the sea Did I come close? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Looks like a dead ringer Sy! But, you'll have to ask the expert 'Deer.  All the best to you and yours in 2007!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear, sweet Sy...even if you didn't come close [because I only hear the rhythm, it seems...] still I would read any of yours, because it all becomes sweet dreams! Thank you, wonderful poet....that you have the heart to try! I would fail, woefully...because at first when I read the challenge, why it sounded a lot like me! [  and that can't be write! Right?] Happy New Year, Sy! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Absolutely SPOT ON !! But then ... that's not unusual for you~ Happy New Year dear poet~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you and you know I wish you all the best.  Sunshine, I hope you had a great New Year and thank you for your wonderful friendship.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge Those are the best words I've read this year. You are a delight you know. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa!!!!! Excellent write Bro!!!! Seriously, this is one of my fav's of yours |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, Thank you so much sweety, I almost gave up Looking for a straight answer. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
gr8 write, Sy  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Your comment does my heart good. Thank you |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, my friend, you get an A for effort for even attempting it! Hats off to you  (as for the rest, we'll discuss it when I come over ) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I don't know the challenge but I do know you and I know you never miss the mark...not even in the dark. Hoppy New Ears. Keth a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer Thanks Mike, looking forward to the rest. See you soon. Kethry Enjoyed your reply, thank you my friend. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
better you should give it a try than me...it was too much thinking for me today~~ M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thanks for letting me go first. LOL |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You came more than close, Sy..... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Remembering and taking a page from your wisdom~~ M |
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