Open Poetry #39 |
ANOTHER TRAGIC DEATH |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
We gathered to morn the loss of Aussie legend Peter Brock, But on day 1 of the Bathurst 1000 the whole nation was left in shock. We all knew that V8 Supercars was a very dangerous sport But little did we know of the lesson we were about to be taught. The whole crowd stopped in dead silence The angels cried for there to be no more violence. Two men were barely breathing As Australia started grieving We held our breaths as we watched you both cling to life But when they pulled your bodies from the wreckage we all knew you were in strife We sat silent as the ambulance slowly took you away As a million prayers swept across the horizon, praying that you would both be okay. All the ford fans were on a high, we were all celebrating For Craig Lowndes had broken the drought and ford had got a win Late Sunday night I awoke, something felt wrong Then all of a sudden, I sat up grabbed my TV remote and turned it on It was the news that left me crying, oh please not today The news we all dreaded appered on my screen Mark Porter had passed away. Mark, fell victim to Mount Panorama, You will be remembered as a true bloody Australian and we will honour you every day. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your country has experienced some tragic losses recently; Our thoughts and prayers are with you. |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
Touching tribute to a fellow human... My thoughts and prayers are with the families.... ~Moonkist~ Freedom Now |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Sunshine, u are 100% right. Australia has lost many well known men latley and as we begin to morn them another one is taken. I guess that its just their time too go. AT LEAST ALL OF THEM PASSED ON DOING WHAT THEY LOVE!! |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
I love how you include thoughts about your country and life were you come from in your poetry. It adds a bit of variety to the writes here at passions. |
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