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Open Poetry #39
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
0 posted 2006-12-31 01:55 AM

You offer me the words you think I should hear
It’s that Mom-thing that you do so well
And I watch and wait for a clue
No longer simply your daughter

I am your watch dog
Seeking reality

Sometimes lost in my fear
Of a life without you in it

Words wash over me
Bolstering my faltering smile

And tomorrow we will face this all again

Together.
Always together.

---

I love you, Mom.
Alison
© Copyright 2006 Alison - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2006-12-31 09:12 AM

ms az, kewl heart ms!!
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
2 posted 2006-12-31 10:39 AM

Alison, this is lovely and would bring tears to any mothers eyes.  Nicely penned my friend, good to see you writing again. Hugs and happy new year.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2006-12-31 12:37 PM

Nice...James
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-12-31 05:44 PM



you've been missed aziza

what a beautiful welcome back poem!
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