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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-12-30 10:50 PM





when I arrived
there were those amazing eyes
blue denim legs
and
a mouth that said
you ain’t no small potatoes lady

front seat of the car  
heat spoke through the window  
roll me down
and proceed

I drew my home  
on your denim leg  
you drew your childhood dog  
around my heart
little boy still pulling at your mouth
  
kiss me

I tasted colorado air  
peaches
souldeep fire
cinnamon from somewhere  
and
wait
something else
something more than
little boy
little girl talk

what was that
tasted like
... yeah
tasted like

big love

mister
you ain’t no small potatoes


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-12-30 10:57 PM


ooh hoo....

wicked grin...

and smiling delightfully.



P.S.  Some great lines...
and lineage!


wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
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2 posted 2006-12-30 11:00 PM


what was that
tasted like
... yeah
tasted like

big love

mister
you ain’t no small potatoes


Siyo Lady the beauty of this mystery fasinates me,I truly enjoy the reading of these things of love you write.Sigi from my heart for sharing the images with me,of what it might be like!


  granny!

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-12-30 11:14 PM




wicked grin back
    Karilea
    
thank you
I’m enjoying this series

Siyo Granny!
thank you for your kind words
I’m glad you enjoy

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-12-31 12:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-31 06:04 PM



Thank you James.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-01-06 08:33 PM


ooooh Kate... loved this one!!     RDB
The Lady
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7 posted 2007-01-06 08:39 PM




thank you Roniece
love is a wonderous thing...
          


Janette
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8 posted 2007-03-04 10:48 AM


I enjoyed of the flavor of this one, so much so I had two helpings of your potatoes, I read it twice.  *wink wink*

Now on to more....michaels....

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

The Lady
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9 posted 2007-03-04 12:28 PM



love is always sweet
in big potato time Janette

thank you


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