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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-12-28 02:58 PM



Sisters standing together
That’s what we are
it matters not distance
how near, or how far;
not race, nor creed
nor color of skin
since the beginning
we have always been
and thus we will remain
until the end.

Sisters holding  
plying grace  
known only to us
feeding
hearing
red and bleeding hearts
crying
one for the other
  
Her pain is
felt, her suffering…
souls speaking  
in tears, mingling.
Soft then, the blend
of voices, braided  
heartstrings threaded  
over and under,  
woven together  
in gossamer silk  
portraits of life  
hanging  
on the wall of
woman


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-28 05:13 PM


darn awesome!
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-28 05:21 PM





thank you so much Dixie

and thank you gentle Donna
for the words and your gentle poke in the back
you always know

wredgranny
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3 posted 2006-12-28 05:59 PM


Her pain is
felt, her suffering…
souls speaking  
in tears, mingling.
Soft then, the blend
of voices, braided  
heartstrings threaded  
over and under,  
woven together  
in gossamer silk  
portraits of life  
hanging  
on the wall of
woman

~AHO~ Well done,and sigi for speaking the heart connection we all feel!


  granny!

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4 posted 2006-12-28 06:03 PM


woven together  
in gossamer silk  '''


indeed....silk...great write

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-28 06:03 PM


and thank you granny
for speaking all connections

glad you liked it


thank you
Greeneyes

wredgranny
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6 posted 2006-12-28 07:52 PM


and thank you granny
for speaking all connections

glad you liked it


thank you
Greeneyes

It is the beauty of true sisterhood that means no boundries beloved ones!


  granny!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2006-12-28 07:54 PM


Kate... true sisterhood is just what you described!  very nice Bella!  RDB
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8 posted 2006-12-28 07:59 PM



Beautifully woven words dear ladies!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-12-28 08:45 PM



Donna and I thank you
Roniece

Nancy
thank you so much


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2006-12-28 08:55 PM


Now, I have had opportunity to duet
with Gentle Spirit, and I can honestly
say...that this was wonderfully seamless...

there is no way for me to know,
ever,
where one began, and the other left off.

Perfect!

Thank you so much
for dancing this one
together!


The Lady
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11 posted 2006-12-28 09:08 PM




thank you so much
Sunshine
    

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2006-12-29 08:10 AM


Thank you all for stopping by and commenting, and Kate, thank you sweetie it's always such a pleasure to duet with you.
LeeJ
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13 posted 2006-12-29 08:59 AM


Good God, you've both colored outside the lines so very well...insightful to say the least....
incredible you two!!!!

Dark Stranger
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14 posted 2006-12-29 11:40 AM


ladyone...you and gs did a nice weave here..sisters hmmmmmmmmmmm
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Deep in the heart
15 posted 2006-12-29 11:46 AM


Now, this is a pair to draw to

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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16 posted 2006-12-29 12:10 PM


~ beautiful ~
hugs to you both
Chris

The Lady
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17 posted 2006-12-30 12:54 PM




it is always my pleasure gentle Donna


oh LeeJ  
thank you so much

yes Stranger darlin’  
we are sisters  
go together  
like sketty and garlic bread  

how sweet Doctor Love  
thank you


thank you kindly Chris

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2006-12-31 10:14 AM


LeeJ, thats a wonderful comment and
I thank you. I have never been one for
coloring inside of the lines.  

D, thanks babe. Sisters um-humm thats
what we are...

Interloper, that was so sweet of you,
thanks.  

Chrislane, hugs back to you and
thank you sweetie.

Kate, such a sweet pleasure it is,
would do-it with you any time hon.


Happy New Year to all, may it be
filled with love, peace, and good health!

Martie
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19 posted 2006-12-31 11:42 AM


You two are lovely, together or alone..."hanging  
on the wall of
woman"


Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2006-12-31 11:48 AM


Martie, and you are lovely too, my dear friend...hugs to you and a VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR. May your life be blessed.
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