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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-26 02:48 PM

              "Sunshine's Sonnet"

    His Sunshine, she so brightly lit his day.
    Made possible Moonshadow oh so deep.
    Yet, now she must remain so far away.
    His muse is held in darkness and asleep.

    The two echanged their hearts and swore to keep
    not knowing that the world would not allow.
    They burned the flame of love with bounds and leaps.
    They spoke of lasting love with every vow.

    The world closed in around them like a shroud
    and shut the love light out, no more to glow.
    The tears fell down like rain from darkened clouds.
    Enough to fill the ocean's overflow.

    For worlds they once again returned their hearts.
    The two will be forever worlds apart.

[This message has been edited by MoonShadow (12-26-2006 04:13 PM).]

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

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CA

1 posted 2006-12-26 04:10 PM

nice job moonshadow

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-12-27 03:16 AM

wonderful write Ken.. RDB

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

3 posted 2006-12-27 10:45 AM

I enjoyed reading this but felt a tinge of pain... Separation is so difficult! Well written.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-12-27 11:32 AM

Interesting write, indeed

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2006-12-27 02:42 PM

Tru, RDB, Interloper... Thank you for the read and comments. You are most kind.

Miscellanea.. your empathetic perception is affirmed... pain, ever present.. though at times masked somewhat.. the dull ache will never subside... there is no possible cure.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-12-27 08:41 PM

Y'know, I've read this one, oh heck,
when it was written, and again, then
again, and was drawn to certain thoughts
and lovely memories...

for if my father hadn't been Gemini
and I hadn't been Sagittarius,
then perhaps I wouldn't have been
his own Sunshine.

It's not quite what all of your poem
depicted, but the certain aspects I
pulled out for my own.

Thank you for this, Poet.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-12-28 12:53 PM

well written Ken...

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