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climbing into the future |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Dedicated to all passionate truth seekers. In my dreams I want to climb the highest mountains with you. Maybe Machu Pichu, Denali (Mc Kinley) or Everest? Mount Masada in Israel will do. Somewhere above the clouds would suit us well, somewhere to search for our own Holy Grail, along a pathway with our names engraved, not atop someone else's enslaved perceptions of freedom's journey. What would we find at the end of our climb? Would we see each other’s aura? Would we read each other’s mind? If I could, I would climb the highest mountains, with you. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
along a pathway with our names engraved, not atop someone else's enslaved perceptions of freedom's journey. ~AHO~ Well said,never take anothers beaten path but blaze your own,one does not know highth or depth until one climbs or dives,eh?
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
nicely written going great lenths for each other I like Rich |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know the feeling Kacy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Kacy, whenever I read your words I am climbing a spiritual mountain with YOU!  May all be merry and bright for you and your loved ones for the coming new year! Happy Holiday Hugs, Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand statement on 'individualism', freedom of expression, and even about the possibility of 'non-possessive' relationships; etc. I find the following lines particularly excellent: “In my dreams I want to climb the highest mountains with you..... Mount Masada in Israel will do..... Somewhere above the clouds...... somewhere to search for our own Holy Grail..... not atop someone else's enslaved perceptions of freedom's journey. What would we find at the end of our climb? Would we see each other’s aura? Would we read each other’s mind?” I can only hope such ‘dreams’ sometimes actually do come true! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Machu Pichu Masada yes somewhere above the clouds magnificent Kacy |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Midnitesun, Yes! What an inspiration and invitation for the new year! To leave the ground and see all the possibilities, and to see them with simultaneously with an other... Just wow! I have always loved the passion in your poetry. This is no exception! Happy New Year, Midnitesun! miscellanea |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You're already pretty high in my mind's eye  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another amazing write~ My spirit will rise |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Thanking each of you so very much, for climbing with me, for sharing your unique passions and dreams.May your finest hopes and dreams be fulfilled as we enter into another new year, as mine are now. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the way you phrase this one. We have to have our own concept of freedom, don't we? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh yes! I'm with the others.. very nicely done !! RDB |
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arbpoet Junior Member
since 2006-11-22
Posts 38 |
Very Good Write! In my dreams I want to visit The Great Pyramids, the Redwood trees in California and see a anaconda snake with my own eyes. |
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