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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-12-22 08:39 PM


Upon This Path of Love

Even though she's not
here with me now
I can feel her love
caressing me, making
me smile.

My love for her
is living in my heart,
showing me the way to her,
preparing my heart.

Within the passage of time
love has no barriers,
there are no limitations upon
this love we share.

Soon she will be
in my arms
showing me how
much for me she cares.

Caressing my heart
upon this path of
love we share.

JamesLee
22December
2006









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2 posted 2006-12-22 10:39 PM


Very nice James.
Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-12-26 04:10 PM


Thank you passing shadows and Nightshade for the nice responses...James
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4 posted 2006-12-31 12:29 PM


It's always nice to be loved. Enjoyed the read ~Bill
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5 posted 2006-12-31 04:46 PM


Great poem of love I would not ghange one word.
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6 posted 2007-01-02 10:38 PM


Awwww, this is so sweet, James. Reminds me
of some of my love poems when Gary and I
are apart.
Hugs,
Ethel

wredgranny
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7 posted 2007-01-02 11:23 PM


Caressing my heart
upon this path of
love we share.

Siyo JamesMicheal I like this very much,it is the love I saw from my grandparents. It mattered not where were they,they were always together,even though she left him here alone a little while there was always for him only her face within his heart!
blessings


  granny!

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8 posted 2007-01-03 04:11 AM


Very touching James...a valentine for the heart.

Bea

LeeJ
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9 posted 2007-01-03 06:48 AM


lovely poem James
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10 posted 2007-01-03 01:32 PM


Nice walk, huh

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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