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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-22 05:48 PM


You are beautiful;
You are the serendipitous motion of silent seduction,
You are chaste and delicate as Persian Buttercup pedals,
You are smooth like the flowing warmth of water in summer,
You are as somberly graced as the sunsets in fall and winter,
Your hair furrows down like smoke down the mountainside,
Your eyes are the color of the earths love for its children,
Your voice is the softness of silence, the beauty of rain,
Your happiness holds the fountain of life to be sipped,
A beauty above loves blindness, that would heal the vexed,
Oh beautiful one, I am so vexed. Please cure my loves fixation.


I am the two-toed wanderer

[This message has been edited by themute (12-22-2006 06:37 PM).]

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the quell
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1 posted 2006-12-24 07:32 PM


Gorgeous. Lovely imagery and emotion. And I appreciate the usage of the word 'vexed'. Beautiful workage.

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-27 03:58 AM


Matthew... very very nice words here!  RDB
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3 posted 2006-12-27 07:28 PM


very nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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