Open Poetry #39 |
December Impromptu |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. As time goes on One finds the past Changing in perception That struggle you thought Was so worthwhile The love you couldn’t live without Lessen often by some degree Yet Christmas Eve In the silent night Is still the focus of faith and hope As if a form of prayer The snowflakes fall Through a streetlamp’s glow That tints the air With a shade of blue Above it all A single star . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so true so good |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...indeed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
John... this was lovely ! RDB |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Yet Christmas Eve In the silent night Is still the focus of faith and hope As if a form of prayer very very moving and pretty |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very nice My spirit will rise |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
oH, be careful! aging is coming. enjoyed and calm heart. |
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