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Open Poetry #39

December Impromptu

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2006-12-22 10:27 AM

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As time goes on
One finds the past
Changing in perception

That struggle you thought
Was so worthwhile
The love you couldn’t live without
Lessen often by some degree

Yet Christmas Eve
In the silent night
Is still the focus of faith and hope
As if a form of prayer

The snowflakes fall
Through a streetlamp’s glow
That tints the air
With a shade of blue

Above it all
A single star

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-22 04:43 PM

so true

so good

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-12-26 04:20 PM

Nice...indeed...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-12-27 05:49 AM

John... this was lovely ! RDB

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2006-12-27 05:55 AM

Yet Christmas Eve
In the silent night
Is still the focus of faith and hope
As if a form of prayer

very very moving and pretty

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2006-12-27 07:32 PM

very nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-24 03:36 PM

oH, be careful! aging is coming.

enjoyed and calm heart.

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