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The Year Long Dip took Hold
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The Year Long Dip took Hold |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Year Long Dip took Hold Melancholia will hold her own song; deep, low, treacherous, yet endearing in some hidden warmth, she glides ’cross the skies and moon, something like Dracula, draining moonsong’s twilight of anything left to live for. I know; for he heard her heart scream… ~*~ Yet, then, Winter’s solstice became one again with me ~ when renewal is slow to start but oh, enjoy! just before the birth, just before the greeting, just before before! And the sun returns, to lift, guide, spring, tide, equal, equate, matter, hold forth for more than nine months. To shine. To be. Winter months will transpire, yet; snows shall fall; wind beget something too strong for mankind to bear…but! some witch sayd, tis your day! times ago, and yes, I say! and it is, and it is, solstice of ice to bear, the gleaming shall become its stare and icy breath become its wear…solstice, solstice… your morning is mine. Come to my breast, I shall augment your life unto spring. But bring Starbucks, if you need more. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
haha i like how you threw that line about starbucks in there, that was great Madness is the gift that has been given to me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Yet, then, Winter’s solstice became one again with me ~ when renewal is slow to start but oh, enjoy! just before the birth, just before the greeting, just before before! And the sun returns, to lift, guide, spring, tide, equal, equate, matter, hold forth for more than nine months. To shine. To be." Karilea, this is wonderful writing! And, the ending? Priceless!!  Sing in me muse... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea,  Okay that closing line got me. And my Nancy could so relate to all of this, yup even the closing.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one can't ever get enough Starbucks or your poetry |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Ah, Starbucks latte. Yummy! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Exceptional writing as always Karilea. hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely poetry, sissie...with or without the coffee.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun insert a damn here..nice work |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Sunshine... I recognize Meloncholia.. that influential lady who I know so well. You describe her so perfectly... and I await, patiently, the clensing rejuvination of winter, while quietly sipping my Starbucks Khave Mocca. Thank you for the Write, Milady. MoonShadow |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Karilea! how wonderful! I was trying so hard to be blue today and you whupped a big laugh on me! bringing eggnog latte grande with whipped cream can I get you something?  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lady, I'm so glad I lifted your blues... and everyone else? Thank you so much for gifting me with sight.... |
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