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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-12-21 09:55 AM

look deep within self
understanding will be found
tears magnify truth

Inspired by: /pip/Forum96/HTML/002199.html

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-12-21 10:01 AM

That's beautiful. There's a stillness there, and the power of contemplation.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2006-12-21 10:46 AM

I've sure expanded truth's proportions mightily. *S*

Beautiful and touching... great work, my friend. *S*

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-12-21 11:11 AM

This is wonderful 'Loper!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-12-21 11:38 AM

and then a smile of knowing

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2006-12-21 01:01 PM

amen to this!
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2006-12-21 01:04 PM

This poem touches deeply and it is easy to see the feelings from the poem that inspired it...Both go hand in hand from deep within....Beautiful....**BIG HUGS**

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2006-12-21 01:06 PM

You were standing under the mistletoe.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-12-21 01:56 PM

perfect answer to a lovely poem

nicely done... both of you

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

9 posted 2006-12-21 11:14 PM

Hey Big Guy,
The ladies are swooning but the men know this to be true too! However, it will reqiure a long pause for reflection. How did you pack so much into so little, anyway? I really like this.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2006-12-21 11:27 PM

ahhh.... simply beautiful and simply true!
enjoyed.. RDB

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

11 posted 2006-12-22 04:03 AM

That is why there are no tears in Heaven,

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2006-12-22 05:57 AM

so beautifully true

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2006-12-26 04:11 PM

Very well done...James

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