Open Poetry #39 |
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I See and See |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
I See and See My eyes that look and see and see Depending on the thought that be I see your hair, your length and bear And with my inner eye your fair Most will see you common birth To me you are uncommon earth While most will see a common bear I will see an angel there You walk this world as one in sight To me this sight is sheer delight Each time I look upon your face My mind will skip a beat in place I orb about your essence bower Like a bee about a flower My thoughts go into weightlessness And all of this I do confess You are my grail or Angel’s dup You are the wine that fills my cup |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I see Sir Sy, I see... ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, Yout read and comment are a joy. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its amazing, how love looks far past and sees beauty in the flaws....tremendous happy tune this morning Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And the top of the morning to you too my dear. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
may your cup always runneth over beautiful write for this morning |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Striking words. Thanks for sharing this poem. Nicely done sir |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVO! Well done, Sy ![]() Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lucky is the one who's seen through such loving eyes. *S* Beautiful write!!! Much love to you and Isabel... I hope your holidays are wonderful! *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are word-beautiful~ (and those legs are hunky-dory too) ![]() Merry Christmas from my heart to yours~ ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, And may your cup be filled to the brim. ![]() trutodaraiders, That is always nice to read, thank you. Interloper You are always encouraging, thank you. suthern, Missed you, hope you had a nice holiday. ![]() Marge, You are a love. ![]() ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I will see an angel there" ah Sir Sy we see with the eyes we are given and yours are pure love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You are so kind. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., all the beauty that you behold is your own beauty being reflected back to you, for your inner beauty radiates without. ![]() Loving hug, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you sweet and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday. ![]() |
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