Open Poetry #39 |
I See and See |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I See and See My eyes that look and see and see Depending on the thought that be I see your hair, your length and bear And with my inner eye your fair Most will see you common birth To me you are uncommon earth While most will see a common bear I will see an angel there You walk this world as one in sight To me this sight is sheer delight Each time I look upon your face My mind will skip a beat in place I orb about your essence bower Like a bee about a flower My thoughts go into weightlessness And all of this I do confess You are my grail or Angel’s dup You are the wine that fills my cup |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I see Sir Sy, I see... loved this write of yours - RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, Yout read and comment are a joy. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
its amazing, how love looks far past and sees beauty in the flaws....tremendous happy tune this morning Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And the top of the morning to you too my dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
may your cup always runneth over beautiful write for this morning |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Striking words. Thanks for sharing this poem. Nicely done sir |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BRAVO! Well done, Sy Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lucky is the one who's seen through such loving eyes. *S* Beautiful write!!! Much love to you and Isabel... I hope your holidays are wonderful! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are word-beautiful~ (and those legs are hunky-dory too) Merry Christmas from my heart to yours~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, And may your cup be filled to the brim. trutodaraiders, That is always nice to read, thank you. Interloper You are always encouraging, thank you. suthern, Missed you, hope you had a nice holiday. Marge, You are a love. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I will see an angel there" ah Sir Sy we see with the eyes we are given and yours are pure love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You are so kind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., all the beauty that you behold is your own beauty being reflected back to you, for your inner beauty radiates without. Loving hug, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you sweet and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday. |
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