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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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0 posted 2006-12-21 02:56 AM

Sometimes It Rages

Sometimes it rages quietly
giving the silence too much power
morning gathers false assurance
cool and brief like a summer shower.

Sometimes it rages loudly
unseen by the eyes that cause it
memories wildly whip and churn it
daylight only serves to pause it.

Sometimes it rages
living on by a distant stare-
not one, but a combination of two...
the fact, in truth, my love for you
and my pain for not having you there.

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

1 posted 2006-12-21 03:13 AM

Hearing your voice. Keep on, you have the strenght ... You Are Loved

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-12-21 04:19 AM

yes, we love you Dixie and we love your work here,... keep writing girlfriend! RDB xx

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

3 posted 2006-12-21 04:32 AM

Dear Dixie,

I feel it too. Wanna rage together?

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

4 posted 2006-12-21 08:58 AM

Very good I like poems that dont seemed forced. Renting, Raging it's good for you sometimes. Just as long as it doesnt cost you your freedom {it's all good}

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2006-12-21 09:34 AM

Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-12-21 01:29 PM

"Sometimes it rages
living on by a distant stare-"

keep telling it Dixie

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2006-12-21 02:31 PM

"Sometimes it rages
living on by a distant stare-
not one, but a combination of two...
the fact, in truth, my love for you
and my pain for not having you there."

Beautiful.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2006-12-21 09:22 PM

Sometimes it does...
I try to favor acceptance...it has a soft way of caressing you...James

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

9 posted 2006-12-21 10:06 PM

a little rage is food for your soul every now and then, it just makes you that much stronger

Madness is the gift that has been given to me

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