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twinkyfl1
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since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

0 posted 2006-12-20 07:00 PM

Little girl, so innocent and pure
Living a life you couldn't endure
You took all the pain and kept it inside
Looking for corners in which you could hide.

Little girl, wanting Daddy's love
Enmeshed in the web that he wove
Knowing it was wrong but feeling it was right
The tears that were shed all alone in the night.

Little girl, the years have been so sad
Looking for something that you've never had
Looking for answers in all the wrong places
Looking for love, but finding just traces.

Looking for love that
You sought in the past
Feeling that this time
You might make it last.

But now my eyes are open
At long last I can see
Just what it is I have to do
To finally be free.

I'm going to take my life back
For this too is my world
I'm going to have to let you go
My sad eyed little girl.

Too long I've carried you around
Too long I've felt your grief
Too long I've cried without a sound
The pain beyond belief.

But now that I have grown up
I've got to let you go
Goodbye my own sweet little girl
And yes, I love you so.

To thy own self be true

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-20 08:29 PM

awesome write June.... RDB x

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

2 posted 2006-12-20 08:56 PM

This was unbearably hard for me to write, but neccessary. Thank you for your kind comment.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-12-21 02:02 AM

just hugs...and an admiration of your strength

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2006-12-21 02:52 AM

Strong material very well expressed in words!

Eric

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

5 posted 2006-12-21 03:11 AM

Feeling your pain, although I have not lived it. Sincerely, martyjo

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

6 posted 2006-12-21 04:15 AM

Dixie, thank you for your comment and especially your hug.

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

7 posted 2006-12-21 04:19 AM

Thank you ethome.

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

8 posted 2006-12-21 04:20 AM

Thank you latearrival for your caring words.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2006-12-21 09:11 AM

It is a gr8 write and a fabulous time and place at which you have arrived

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

10 posted 2006-12-21 03:19 PM

Not quite sure what you mean by fabulous place and time, but thank you for taking the time to write a comment.

Merry, Merry Christmas!

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