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Loving You
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Loving You |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
This pain in my heart's like a razor 'Causing my heart to bleed The tears in my eyes are like raindrops Falling on all your misdeeds. You tell me you love me, then hurt me When I need you, you always desert me You call it love and I call it pain Why stay around when there's nothing to gain I want so to go, but still I remain..loving you. I pray every night that He'll free me From this hell where no one can see me So lost in your world and feeling so numb Not liking this person I've slowly become. A person who's split in so many parts Picking up pieces of my broken heart. Living on memories of our distant past Wondering why we just can't seem to last. How long can I keep holding on Feeling the pain from twilight to dawn This torment that my soul goes through From loving you...From loving you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I think you are in need of a great big hug of love and a show of appreciation. One who is capable of such love is deserving of having it returned. A very moving read. Never lose sight of your own precious, 'twink'ling self. Loving Light ~ and a healing hug, EA |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
This was a nice poem though sad it might be your did a nice job penning your fellings down. Anyone that has been heartbroken, and has the desire to be loved can relate. ~Bill |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
time to stop the pain love is meant to bring great joy happiness the goal Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Earth Angel, I feel loved and wanted in the warmth of your hug. Thank you for that and your comment. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
trutodaraiders, Thank you for your kind words, they are appreciated. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Interloper, Thanks for your well intentioned words. Unfortunately, pain doesn't come with a timetable. Merry Christmas. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this and I don't think it's worth it to love someone who brings pain but I know, it's not like a switch you can just turn off |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sad but very well expressed Eric |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Thanks Dixie, What about 'Clap On'? That's not a switch. See, I can still laugh. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Thanks ethome, you're a good person. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
June.... I'm sending you a "HUG" xx RDB |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Roniece, Thanks. Got it. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhhhh June such great pain hugs and more hugs |
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Draugluin Junior Member
since 2006-12-08
Posts 48Ontario, Canada |
It's odd how the best things in life can also be the most painful, very emotional poem, good work. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Lady thanks, I'll take all the hugs I can get. |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Wise observation. Thank you Draugluin. |
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