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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-12-20 07:28 AM


we were the galloping ones then
on nimble prancing we did our run
from each other we were togethering
to imagine town beyond the outskirts

somewhere in the center of deep water
we bathed the dryness of our mouths
with love song whispering sounds
and let our hands know the hidden

others touching always makes sin
feel appropriately predetermined
so we allowed pretended destiny
and returned it well beyond used

back to the shelves of our individuality
where we sat and watched the residue
of slow oozing candles cover
the sensual of fingerprints lingering

on the thick hollow of hungry empties


_______________

daark


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-20 08:19 AM


others touching always makes sin
feel appropriately predetermined
so we allowed pretended destiny
and returned it well beyond used

I like these words Mr Dark RDB

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-12-20 06:30 PM


ms b, thanks to you lady friend
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-12-20 11:02 PM




"somewhere in the center of deep water
we bathed the dryness of our mouths
with love song whispering sounds
and let our hands know the hidden"

so beautiful
Stranger darlin'


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2006-12-21 06:51 AM


ladyone, thanks for leaning over and lighting my cigar with your eyes
trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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5 posted 2006-12-21 09:41 AM


Hey how can I block this guys IP address I cant keep a eye on my girl 24/7 *lol* great imagination Dark enjoyed the read as always. Hey hon come here and read this poem I wrote *lol j/k!
Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-12-21 09:43 AM


truto...relax, she is safe..trust me I am a Dr. (grin) thanks guy
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