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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-19 08:56 PM


I seek the land of loves content;
Where she and I can hold each other
To love a soul without repent
For she nor I can love another
And once the sun doth rise-to-show
The meadows mist whose shadows know
That love doth come with distant relations
Perusing the closeness that never can come
And the consistent fulfillment of love-felt sensations
Nye tricks nor lies, but truer than from
The love sent as sun
As love hath begun.

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-12-19 09:13 PM


Hello Matt you are such a romantic!
And that is good, especially for those of us who love to read romantic poetry!
Keep your muse busy.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-12-19 10:08 PM


And once the sun doth rise-to-show
The meadows mist whose shadows know
That love doth come with distant relations


that, to me, says it all

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-19 10:09 PM


yes!  RDB
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-12-20 06:50 PM


Nice writing...James
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