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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-12-18 05:41 PM



I will breathe you in
savor the essence of you
never to exhale

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-18 05:43 PM


wow... can you please breathe me in ??
love your words here! RDB

Nightshade
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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-12-18 05:44 PM


*sigh*

Hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2006-12-18 05:59 PM


Interloper
LOL Now that's a deep breath.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-12-18 06:38 PM



*SIGH*

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-12-18 07:38 PM


yes...*sigh*
ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2006-12-19 09:24 AM


All six senses applaud!
I always enjoy your delightful muse.

TD

Merry Christmas

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2006-12-19 09:54 AM



~Breathless, I await
The exhale of poetry
From inkwell of you~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-12-19 12:25 PM


Sigh....can I exhale now?

wonderful poem

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2006-12-19 12:41 PM



Be careful...that could hurt!

And the charming visual is thinking
of a little boy holding his breath...




Startime55
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10 posted 2006-12-19 03:06 PM


I could not resist
the hot breath of heated words
making the blood boil

Serves you right for having a talent that draws one to your words...intoxicating...**BIG HUGS**

jwesley
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11 posted 2006-12-19 07:57 PM


I agree with Seymour . . . a breath very well taken...

jwesley

The Lady
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12 posted 2006-12-19 09:20 PM




could you breathe again please
I got here a little late
missed the big breathing...


rwood
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13 posted 2006-12-20 07:47 AM



when?

I don't wanna be late.

Lovin' the sighs you make.

Always,
Reg

divine chaos
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dancing 'neath the moon
14 posted 2006-12-20 08:28 AM


the waiting line for that breath starts ..where??  

loverly!

~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2006-12-20 10:11 AM


Well, Doctor Love, I was delighting in you as I was breathing in your sweet mots!

Extremely sensual! Awwwww......



Love & Christmas Light,
EA

twinkyfl1
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16 posted 2006-12-20 04:37 PM


Dear Interloper,

Be careful, it sounds as though you might be in the throes of a "Fatal Attraction" wherein the breath will be sucked from your body by a vaccumn cleaner run amok by ravenous hunger.

This scene played out in my mind, unbidden I might add. My mind often does this at its own volition, sometimes causing me to giggle uncontrollably.

Please forgive my mind, it knows not what it does. After I had settled it down, I proceeded to read your piece anew, and found it quite lovely and enjoyed it immensely.

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2006-12-21 02:22 AM


Enjoyed...James
ethome
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18 posted 2006-12-21 02:44 AM


Loveit!
Keep the good stuff in never to give it up...

Eric

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19 posted 2006-12-29 01:20 PM


Of all the beauties you've written, this might just be my favorite. *S* The doctor is definitely IN... and this is going in my library! *S*
miscellanea
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20 posted 2007-01-15 07:03 PM


delighting in "Delighting in you"!  Exquisite!

miscellanea

Angel4aKing
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21 posted 2007-01-16 12:47 PM


this made me smile....thanx

~~~kingsangel~~~

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