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There is Nothing Wrong
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There is Nothing Wrong |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
As Always, thanks to all those who read my poems...and thanks for all the warm replies. Here we go, There is Nothing Wrong There is nothing wrong with the rain there is nothing wrong with the sky there is nothing strange in the air only those words that don't reach your heart there is nothing weird about this cold there is nothing out of place only your face, full of sadness crying, trying to tell the truth the other day we met and your words came out of the blue they kicked me out of my world they kicked me out of my paradise i just don't understand why you took me out of your heart cause there was nothing wrong there was nothing strange with my love there is nothing wrong with the rain there is nothing wrong with the sky there is nothing strange up there everything is as everyday but still i can't understand why you have taken me out of your life the other day we met and your words came out of the blue they made me believe that i wasn't right now, without you i have realized that there is nothing wrong there is nothing strange there is nothing odd or weird about what i feel about what i did for you if you ever stop wandering around you will see that i was right you will see, i'm sure you will that there is nothing wrong with me there is nothing strange or out of place only the truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely said |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is good - I read it thru twice just to get the feel of it - I liked your words - you portrayed them very nicely - and you are right - there is nothing wrong with you!  RDB |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Thanks for your Kind Words Passing shadows and RDB i really appreciate it. I'm happy you liked this one...it has a very strong meaning for me. Thanks again!. Denis. |
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