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Open Poetry #39

Our Saviour

lightkeeper
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since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

0 posted 2006-12-17 01:31 PM

  With a joyful cry,
  expiration of this infants lungs
  rang out such glad tidings,
  for our saviour,
  his son.

  From that day forth
  would this fragile soul,
  carry the weight of the world
  and the sins of man upon his shoulders.

  Forget not...Our saviour,
  remember his sacrifices for us,
  as well as his birth,
  let them not have been,
  in vain.

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-17 03:33 PM

i dont anyone dare try to critque this poem; beautiful message

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2006-12-18 01:41 PM

Yes this poem has a meaning of pure gold. In this comercial world, the true reason and meaning of christmas is nearly forgotten...nearly.. but not quite when you write like this sweetheart a brilliant poem..thank you..

Love phil.xxxxxx

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-12-18 04:29 PM

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-12-18 05:53 PM

Nice writing...I pray that God will open up hearts to believe in this precious gift of Love...James

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