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lightkeeper
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

0 posted 2006-09-13 12:08 PM

Opened eyes is the seer
watching over the world
like a blanket comforting
As the Sunsets.
Cast into darkness
Heaven's lights guide us
vivid dreams
Awakening our souls
free us from bondage.
To walk freely among the souls of others
Rememberance
Continues.
Knowing is pleasing
that love is never lost
souls smile and dance
as time stands still.
Closed eyes of the seer
light watches over us
as the sun rises
a comforting warmth
eases memories lost.

Lisey
Junior Member

since 2006-08-27

Posts 36
UK (Wales)

1 posted 2006-09-13 01:24 PM

all i can say is beautiful!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-09-13 01:33 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very nice entrance post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again....

lightkeeper
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

3 posted 2006-09-13 01:57 PM

Bless your heart lisey

thankyou for your feedback x

lightkeeper
Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 100
pluto

4 posted 2006-09-13 02:03 PM

Thankyou Nancy for your kind words and warm greetings. Your feedback is very much appreciated

x

cbautista
Junior Member

since 2006-09-13

Posts 38

5 posted 2006-09-13 03:37 PM

The way you wrote it, makes it look like steam rising.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2006-09-14 06:53 AM

very nice and welcome

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2006-09-14 10:00 AM

>b>LightKeeper~
Welcome to the poetic portals of PiP~

'Closed eyes of the seer
light watches over us'

I felt it~

Enjoy yourself within this circle of friends~

*Huglets*

~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2006-10-05 11:25 AM

This is a fine entrance to the pages here, it is always nice to see good new poets coming along and you certainly are very good, thank you for the words..and welcome to passions..

Goldenrose.

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