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Enchantress
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0 posted 2006-12-15 01:48 PM






Perhaps tonight
if you don't mind  
could you   would you...just hold me?

Just for this evening
this one time..

no need for talk about our day
and what others had to say..
please   let your love surround me  
enfold me ~ just let me   be.

In your arms I feel sheltered   protected
nothing can harm or hurt me..
  I am free of all pain
     and the world is at peace.

There will be time   to talk   to laugh
to discuss our lives
and decide which path
we need to travel
but now, for tonight
please    just  hold me?

.

© Copyright 2006 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
MoonShadow
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1 posted 2006-12-15 02:02 PM


Nancy... such a warm wonderful rendering.. and beautiful invitation to experience the softer side of heaven.. (sigh) if... only.. hmmmmmmm... (sigh)

   Thank you for sharing and inspiring such warm wonderful thoughts in my own mind, dear Lady.



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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-12-15 02:03 PM


OKAY!
I volunteer!
The line forms to my rear  


Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2006-12-15 02:04 PM


but now, for tonight
please    just  hold me?


...well, I'll try, but I have been carrying parcels all day.
Hee heee heee.....I know, I have to behave or else Santa won't bring me anything.
Lovely this and you.
Hugs & Miss Ya!!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-12-15 02:09 PM


Nance~
So softly spoken
this beautiful word-token~

He won't be able to resist~

Sending BIG HUGLETS

Received your beautiful Christmas card in the mail today~
Thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com   

JL
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5 posted 2006-12-15 02:10 PM


Whew….
Beautiful!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-12-15 02:55 PM


Ken~"the softer side of heaven"...exactly.

Interloper~Lucky you..you're first in line.

Chris~Well then how about I hold you up? LOL.
Still shopping I see... heehee.  Love ya!


Enchantress
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7 posted 2006-12-15 02:57 PM


Marge~You kind remarks are always appreciated.
Glad to see the old snail mail still goes through.
You are so very welcome for the card.  

JL~I thank YOU for the "Whew".
Happy holidays to you and yours.

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-12-15 05:33 PM


(sigh) symphonic in it's own being...
this was just how we ladies feel sometimes...and you have done us justice...simply fantastic write

passing shadows
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9 posted 2006-12-15 05:35 PM


wonderfully done!


Enchantress
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10 posted 2006-12-15 06:48 PM


Lee~Yup we do feel this way at times.
So glad you understand.  

Dixie~And you're some kind of wonderful yourself!

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11 posted 2006-12-16 08:18 AM


Beautiful
Enchantress
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12 posted 2006-12-16 09:13 AM


Christine~Thank you for the beautiful.  
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13 posted 2006-12-16 10:16 AM


Nope, the line forms on the left side and
"loper....guess what?  

Excellent Nancy, hope your holiday is a warm
and merry one...kick the muse a few times.
Sending over the posse and the cavalry....

Enchantress
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14 posted 2006-12-16 12:04 PM


Barry~May you and yours have the happiest holiday ever!
Thank you for your sweet reply.

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15 posted 2006-12-16 01:27 PM


There is nothing to me that is more romantic than to be able to cuddle up with someone you love and loose yourself in them.It's refreshing when all your troubles seem to vanish in the moment. Well done Enchantress.
Enchantress
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16 posted 2006-12-16 01:29 PM


trutodaraiders~Tis I who thanks you for your great reply!
scorpio
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right...there
17 posted 2006-12-16 03:11 PM


Beautifully expressed Tinker.  A simple human gesture with profound impact. Holding you...in my thoughts.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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18 posted 2006-12-16 03:23 PM


Ah sweet Scorpio~I was wondering when you may appear.
Thank you so much for your kind reply, Tinker.

JamesMichael
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19 posted 2006-12-16 05:59 PM


Uh huh...James
Enchantress
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20 posted 2006-12-16 10:00 PM


James~You seem to understand..
thank you for your reply.

The Lady
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21 posted 2006-12-16 11:27 PM



warm, quiet and cozy
and just what I needed to read tonight
dear Nancy


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2006-12-17 03:28 AM


Nancy... oh my! I love your write!  RDB
Enchantress
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23 posted 2006-12-17 08:52 AM


Lady~I thank you so much for stopping by and reading.  

Roniece~Thank you!  I appreciate your comments!  


Goodknight
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24 posted 2006-12-17 03:40 PM


Yes Nancy we all have days like that - glad to hold you - loved the write - Paul
Enchantress
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25 posted 2006-12-17 04:59 PM


Ahh thank you Paul!
arthur
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26 posted 2006-12-18 02:12 PM


what a blessing there is in silence
arthur

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