Waterfall-love (duet with 'second-hand-dream' poet)

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Open Poetry #39

Waterfall-love (duet with 'second-hand-dream' poet)

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

0 posted 2006-12-15 01:39 AM

desire's gentle tease
fans ecstasy's untamed flame
in cascading passionate pleasures
of mystic waterfall-love

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-15-2006 07:35 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2006-12-15 07:39 AM

it surprised me how short this is to be a duet...but that makes it superior!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-12-15 07:58 AM

well, there ya go, now where's a waterfall when you need one?

lovely write

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

3 posted 2006-12-15 08:14 AM

Most of the credit for this 'write' should go to the v. talented Kacy who initiated it
and provided the fine imagery; etc. I simply applied some 'tailoring' via my style
and technique of 'minimalistic constructionalism'

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-12-15 12:59 PM

I love it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

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The Southwest

5 posted 2006-12-15 10:54 PM

So do I!

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