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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-12-15 01:39 AM




desire's gentle tease
fans ecstasy's untamed flame
in cascading passionate pleasures
of mystic waterfall-love

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-15-2006 07:35 AM).]

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1 posted 2006-12-15 07:39 AM


it surprised me how short this is to be a duet...but that makes it superior!
LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-12-15 07:58 AM


well, there ya go, now where's a waterfall when you need one?  

lovely write

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2006-12-15 08:14 AM


Most of the credit for this 'write' should go to the v. talented Kacy who initiated it
and provided the fine imagery; etc.  I simply applied some 'tailoring' via my style
and technique of 'minimalistic constructionalism'

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-12-15 12:59 PM


I love it

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-15 10:54 PM



So do I!



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