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The Dancer And The Dance
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The Dancer And The Dance |
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Nikerlz Junior Member
since 2006-08-31
Posts 37California |
How to tell composition from composer Arranger from arrangement You are not your job But your job is you You see Because thats what you do And you cant tell the dancer from the dance Its a hopeless romance Trying to distinguish the dance All art is the same A tragedy of lifes honest game Its always better to be hungry then full Being full is the same as not being hungry at all A lesson to learn in life Its all the same when you see things as trite I can never change who I am But that wont stop me from being all I can Some live life as a dream Others sew the seam Faith seems dignit in reason Providing a way and season For rebirth Love is real Living to know Expanding to grow Not just the opposite gender Intimate knowing Growing Why gay? Because love goes either way Why kill? Psychological reason has taught us this thrill A reason for every life Truth is the sane of night Why lie? We pretend to fly We are the eyes of god Collectively revealing Fluid distrust Lust Were Always changing Remaining Always the same thing With eyes closed and a vision Transformed before my eyes I now realize We are not who we seem Not us and not them Not who I think I am |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There are so many quotable lines in your philosophizing, poetic thoughts! i.e. "I can never change who I am But that wont stop me from being all I can" ~ Hallelujah, amen! I ditto that!  Loving Light, EA  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those are the very lines I gravitated to, as well. An excellent poem, and one that I read three times, to encapsulate the emotion. Thank you. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
So very nicely written... ~Alli~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I have learned....finally and too late to prevent most of the bad stuff from visiting me....life shouldn't happen to me, I should happen to it. But even too late may not be too late. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
A focused beam of thoughts leading and ending with one question....cool write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perception is an amazing thing |
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