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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

0 posted 2006-12-14 05:56 PM

Passion, a draw-string purse, open,
Yearning to release and aspire;
it's a copper wire coiled ten thousand times,
Electro-Magnetized and spinning;
Fired up and grinning

Yet, somewhere…

a small boy has no wonder
Has never sensed the velvet of grass
Or given of pane his windowed breath;
Curiosity bereft;

Where two they meet,
the Passionate and Bereaved,
before potential leaves of wonder
raked away?
A draw string at hand

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (12-16-2006 10:44 AM).]

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2006-12-14 10:37 PM

Ah misc, wonder in your writing yet again.
Very much enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2006-12-14 11:14 PM

I think this is a new favorite of mine from you.

Loved it.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-12-15 08:04 AM

oh how I loved this, awesome

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-12-15 10:49 PM

I was not prepared
for the breathlessness of this...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-12-17 08:13 AM

Subtlety, in superb meter.
You write from a centered place of view and vision.
TD

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2006-12-17 12:01 PM

This one makes you stop, think and give
thanx for what you have..

Thank You!

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

7 posted 2006-12-17 08:16 PM

yes
it kind of catches you off guard
and makes you feel as though
your breath was snatched away.
beautiful write!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-12-17 08:22 PM

Very nicely done misc!
Much enjoyed the read sweet lady.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2006-12-17 08:25 PM

Misc'e...

You draw pictures,
I see images,
we make music in silence...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

10 posted 2006-12-22 01:58 AM

yes! RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2006-12-22 07:59 AM

I read this one earlier...thought I left a comment but I didn't

nicely done

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2006-12-22 08:42 AM

Misc~
You word-painted it so perfectly ... I could see it~

Merry Christmas~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2006-12-22 01:16 PM

Cathy, your poetry always deserves at least two reads. The subtle nuances draw me back to ponder anew!

Love & Christmas Light,

Linda

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2006-12-22 04:49 PM

good read

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