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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2006-12-14 03:00 PM


We were soaring there
somewhere in yesterday
before wings were weakened
by the passing of time

and God, how I loved you
so much back then

before we flew too close
to the sun
before our wings were broken
and we lost the capability
to heal

back when I could still feel

the joy found
in simple moments spent
doing nothing more
than looking into each others eyes

before our spirits

forgot how to fly....

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-12-14 03:07 PM


1derful

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-12-14 04:07 PM




"before our spirits

forgot how to fly...."

sad song here
gentle Donna


trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2006-12-14 04:23 PM


): So sad nicely done
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-12-14 04:29 PM


yep...I relate
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