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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-13 02:25 PM

    "She ............ and ............ He"

Golden treasure, beauty rare,
gentle face, angelic hair.

               Quiet strength in loving arms,
               twinkling eyes, a smile that charms.

Loving heart so kind and true,
eyes that sparkle green to blue.

                Tender touch that speaks of more,
                says, "It's you that I adore".

        All of these and more it seems,
        are haunting them in nightly dreams,
        and while the fire of passion burns
        a soul cries out for whom it yearns.

        O'er the distance spirits reach
        till hand in hand they join with each
        and holding tight they coar above
        filled with longing, filled with love.

        There, united with devotion,
        feeling such deep, sweet emotion,
        gentle lovers all aglow
        shine like stars on all below.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-13 02:30 PM

Well done. Nice flow to this poem. Just beautifully written

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Draugluin
Junior Member

since 2006-12-08

Posts 48
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2006-12-13 02:33 PM

Nice description of those first deep wounds of love, GJ.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-12-13 02:36 PM

Oh wow....sigh, this is LOVELY!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-12-13 02:52 PM

1derful write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2006-12-13 08:49 PM

TU... glad you read and liked.. Thank you.

GJ.. Thanks for reading. Don't think I see those 'deep wounds' you saw though.

Gentle Spirit.. I am so glad you enjoyed it, Milady. Always smile to see your response. Thank you.

Int... Thaks for the read. Good to hear from you.

MoonShadow

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-12-13 11:08 PM

MoonShadow

she and he
are so lovely together

well done!

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2006-12-13 11:15 PM

TLady... (smile) glad you point out that 'both' are there in description and verse... You read between the lines very well, Milady.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2006-12-13 11:47 PM

lovely!! RDB

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2006-12-14 12:34 PM

Beautiful dreamy togetherness

Hope

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

10 posted 2006-12-15 09:14 AM

This is very romantic and sensual...

It can break one's heart or bring sweetness.

FNG

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2006-12-15 09:32 AM

Softly and sensually penned Ken.
How lovely indeed.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

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