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Open Poetry #39

Just Be

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

0 posted 2006-12-12 12:41 PM

the day is coming to and end and I feel so close to you
your not here by my side but your heart is here with me
so many days ahead yet I wish today was the day
that I could have you here in my arms in my bed

Im growing up and learning to face my fears
slowly Im maturing and knowing I have to let things be
I cant control you and you cant control me
only time will take over what you and I can be

don't want to rush things but take our time
Im ready to step back for a while and wait another day
I can feel it in my bones that you will be mine
next year I will capture you and end this curiosity

but for now I let you have your fun and me mine
for we have a whole year ahead to spend together
learning the new things as we collide
and I let you take my hand and lead the way

our new journey is not far away
a long kiss awaits your face the next time we meet
for this time my future love we play for keeps

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-12 07:28 AM

good to read you again

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-12-12 10:09 AM

Truly a work in the raw

It would really be gr8 if you would work on your punctuation

Still, I enjoyed it.

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

tatalinia
Member

since 2005-12-17

Posts 137
CA, US

3 posted 2006-12-12 11:28 AM

I just write it as it comes, may not be perfect or edited to the core but its how I saw it when I wrote it. Thats true work, when its written as is and not perfected to the eyes of other readers but to the eye of the writer.

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2006-12-14 05:04 AM

yes, true words here... RDB

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