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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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You took a peek into my heart and plucked my emotions by the root like popping up daisies you sowed my garden |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Its not a Haiku or even a Senryu I love it anyway  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
An interesting write that suggests two people involved emotionally aren't necessarily involved to the same degree. When this happens, good-bye seems like betrayal. Thanks for sharing this. PLEASE VISIT MY WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
good work Angel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What Interloper said. Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I love this, especially the second line. and the third line...and the fourth and 1st. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
i like it! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Interloper~~I wasn't sure...glad you liked it though... Shirtless~~there are many difeerent degrees one can go through in the same night~thank you Lady~~thanks a bunch for stopping by Nightshade~~what is a haiku? Jess~~In that order???  P~S~Thanx for reading..i was going to make this longer but I stopped there~~take care.. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
A haiku is a three line poem. The first line has five syllables, the second seven, and the third five. These poems traditionally had nature as a subject, and there was usually a word or phrase that indicated the season. A poem with the same structure that makes reference to the human situation is a senyru. The haiku may be Japanese in origin. Regards, Shirtless PLEASE VISIT MY WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Thank you shirtless Iknow I learned that somewhere before.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Julie.. I like this write of yours RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul..heck with haikie,,enjoyed your word play |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Nice. This website here is real informative on Haiku style poetry http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm |
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