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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2006-12-11 06:44 AM



You said we have to talk
You said it’s not going to work
For you...
But do you actually know what I do
Do you actually know how I work things thru
I think of you as my friend
But somehow I know it won’t work in the end
How sad the day that will be

You actually don’t know how much I love you do you…


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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-12-11 07:01 AM


ms b, enjoyed this view of you

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-11 07:09 AM


thank you Mr Dark... your comments are valued!  RDB
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-11 01:15 PM


Some people are just plain blind.
I enjoyed your write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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