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And so I stay....
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And so I stay.... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I'm not sure this actually works but again, just thoughts that were in my head I had to get them out ! RDB How do I end this sadness Which dwells inside me each day How do I end this madness Which consumes me in every way And so I stay And a little piece of me dies each day And so I stay When all I want is to run away Where did our love that was oh so strong Become a love that is now gone If I left would you miss my laughter If I left would you miss my smile If I left would you miss me next to you If I left would you be in denial I no longer remember the happy times past I no longer crave for your smiles that last But still I stay… Oh my! my photo is up!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Nice to see your picture... Sometimes staying is the only way...because the grass is not always greener on the other side of the fence. but maybe gaining new interests and activities to share may do the trick... I am no expert except I am living through it M |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh thank you thank you ... your words are very encouraging.. I appreciate your comments RDB |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Nice to put a face with the poetry....I have asked myself the same question in my life many times....good work!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you gorgeous girl Julie! RDB |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, someday you will regret staying, the road brings so much forgivness..lonely but free..enjoyed this and the photo ain't bad!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Mr Dark.... your comments have lifted my spirit! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful poem...beautiful picture! *sending hugs today* |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Dixie - appreciate your comments... RDB |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Maybe you should give him this poem... Communication is paramount in all relationships. Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi pretty lady! Just to write it from the feeling, is the best way to write...like this. |
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