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Stillness of the Aftermath
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Stillness of the Aftermath |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA 
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rehearsing it all again in my mind imagining it differently this time testing the waters does it hurt any less? the jagged edge of the sword twisted and she watched as you pulled it out tears were never enough though we all saw plenty and through it all I, remaining..... completely in the dark find comfort in the stillness of the aftermath.... kingsangel [This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (12-11-2006 05:33 AM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Julie... this is beautiful! RDB |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
 Thank you so much again....take care!!kingsangel |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
As a reader on this poem it left me with many questions (which I like) I do that with a lot of poetry. Nicely done |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul, enjoyed the swordplay here |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
touche |
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superbee New Member
since 2006-11-28
Posts 7USA |
Dark thanx for the peek! Interloper...gald you liked!!! Superbee |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Dark thanx for the peek! Interloper...gald you liked!!! ps i was replying as my roomate...he's superbee and I forgot to check his log in status.. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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