Death Waiting In The Wings

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Open Poetry #39

Death Waiting In The Wings

stevepoet
Junior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 46

0 posted 2006-12-10 04:45 AM

From the top of buildings I scream "where's my money"...all lays on deaf ears,the thunder pours down on me like rain but much much louder,I can feel the shivering of a dead boy laying in the ground,still writing his poetry but also cursed by the plague of deaf ears.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2006-12-10 05:06 AM

Well, that's dark but very interesting. Sometimes dark can be an inspiration whether planned that way or not.

Pleased to meet you.

Eric

IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2006-12-10 05:50 AM

I can feel sadness in this write Steve... well done RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2006-12-10 08:46 AM

wow...made me shiver

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