Open Poetry #39 |
So far apart |
spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
So far apart There is a beauty deep inside you That only others see Because of how you judge yourself So harsh and critically A soft quiet kind of innocence Fresh as an open spring You glide so through My love sworn eyes I melt at just the thought That through this troubled time We are so far apart Wondering if the spaces Between your heart and mine Could ever gap the distance And find some warm confine Where everything you whisper I hear and understand Where talking isn’t broken But an easy joyful time I love you doesn’t tell you How much that I perceive Saying that I’m sorry Is beyond what you believe To be the light, the glory That sparkle in your eye No longer tells the story The love you can’t deny Is standing by Waiting, wondering watching. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I thought that this poem was ok, but i loved the meaning behind it. I feel a sense of some forced flow.Thank you for sharing this poem |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Richard. I love your poem. Reminds me of a lot I have written, since my Honey Love and I have a long-distance relationship.......because of circumstances beyond our control. We have very high phone bills. LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
such a tender heart, you |
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spiked4 Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35Hammond, La |
Thank you trutodaraiders forced flow from not writing in so long need to get the rhythm back will com with work. garysgirl and serene much love thanks |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful and tender writing. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
aww how sweet so nice to see you back [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (12-09-2006 09:07 PM).] |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
and I am wishing.........that I wasn't so afraid of love.... |
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