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Open Poetry #39

The Devil's way

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

0 posted 2006-12-09 07:32 AM

The devil hides to slowly intrude
He heightens the pleasure to murder the mood
He cuts out desire to watch as it bleeds
Intrudes on the soul as he plants all his seeds

He cages the goodness in cell somewhere lost
To feed us with visions that someday will cost
Allows us temptation and sins of his make
So when it’s all over, our soul he can take

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2006-12-09 07:51 AM

everyone has temptations and sins

but Thank God there is another way

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-12-09 01:17 PM

Rick~
That's the AMEN of it, for sure~

Devil be gone !!
XXX

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

3 posted 2006-12-09 01:22 PM

Your words hit home. There is not 1 word I would ever change on this poem

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2006-12-14 05:16 AM

Rick... there never was a truer word writ!
enjoy reading your work.... RDB

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2006-12-14 08:53 AM

so so true, but we're not going to allow, that mean old brute not one ioda of belief, are we...

Hugs to you Rick for another great write.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2006-12-14 09:44 AM

...and all be warned!
Thanx for the write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

7 posted 2006-12-20 07:31 AM

To all you my friends, thank you so much for your replies, great to see you all here. If I don't see you for a little while, may you all have a wonderful Christmas and New Year, take care and enjoy.

Sincerely
Rick

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